![]() ![]() Although I am curious to see if the writing improves. ![]() At the moment I have no desire to read the next book in the series. The action is good and the story is easy to follow I just struggled with the aforementioned editing issues and the believably in parts. I like the premise and it is not an idea I have seen elsewhere – maybe that just means I need to read more. The story centres on Marshall Hail – a billionaire with a small fleet of specially modified cargo ships and drones to rid the world of arms dealers and terrorist. I.e the major issues have been ironed out but it is not quite ready. In essence this feels like a third or fourth draft. The story is interesting but there are writing issue throughout that really needed to be resolved before it was released. ![]() It didn’t feel to me completely polished. The best I can say about this is that it shows promise. Although looking at other reviews on Goodreads it is quite clear that he has blanketed many people with the free copy, I say all this because Brett Arquette specifically mentioned Tom Clancy as a reason he thought I would enjoy his book. ![]()
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